I liked the way you set it out and the way you started it.
How do you think we can help fair trade famers and the company.
You can add more exciting pictures and don’t make the sentences long.
I liked the way you set it out and the way you started it.
How do you think we can help fair trade famers and the company.
You can add more exciting pictures and don’t make the sentences long.
sara this is a good thing for me and it helps me learn all about Fair trade. how long did this take and where did u get the information. you should check your spellings.
I love how you explained Fairtrade more deeply.
How do they support farmers with their children ?
You can improve by including more detail with brackets.
Sara this helps me learn so much more about fairtrade. after reading this I almost fell of my chair laughing. This is really amazing. I really love how you set it up. although you could improve this by adding a bit higher levelled vocabulary.
Great work you did about fair trade
why don’t they get enough money
I liked the way you set it out and the way you started it.
How do you think we can help fair trade famers and the company.
You can add more exciting pictures and don’t make the sentences long.
By Ruwayda [:
thank you for sending improvements everyone even hanny who does not add a question after I tell him to
THANK YOU!!!!
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October 16, 2017 at 1:04 pm
I liked the way you set it out and the way you started it.
How do you think we can help fair trade famers and the company.
You can add more exciting pictures and don’t make the sentences long.
By Ruwayda [:
sara this is a good thing for me and it helps me learn all about Fair trade. how long did this take and where did u get the information. you should check your spellings.
you can improve on more writing
I like how you interduesed the reader
you can add more information to what you are talking about
what are the farmers doing
I love how you explained Fairtrade more deeply.
How do they support farmers with their children ?
You can improve by including more detail with brackets.
nice letter from nehaan
nice work haha
Sara this helps me learn so much more about fairtrade. after reading this I almost fell of my chair laughing. This is really amazing. I really love how you set it up. although you could improve this by adding a bit higher levelled vocabulary.