1. I like you made it really on the point
2. Some people think that Fair Trade is too expensive but I disagree with them, it’s good
3.I like your handwriting
you did a great piece of writing keep it up
2.I liked the whole thing.Some people think that Fair Trade is too expensive but I disagree with them, it’s good
Fair Trade
to pay just a little bit of money to help support the Fair Trade community. Fair Trade helps poor people get some money so they can afford food, even a house to live and buy furniture. Fair Trade helps our environment get rid of the pollution that have given to our land. Fair Trade helps Farmers, community’s also school’s improve we all need to support Fair Trade as much as we can because Fair Trade helps this world. Even though you have to play to help Fair Trade you have to do it! Without Fair Trade poor people could die without any money no homes no food to survive outside they may even freeze to death! So this is why we need to help Fair Trade as much as we can to save all those poor people out there so they can have a better life! Fair Trade is what we need in this world and some countries don’t even have Fair Trade so we need to donate as much money as we can to help Fair Trade get over to other countries who don’t have it yet so they can start getting a better life and help their own family survive, there a millions of poor kids out there with no family Fair Trade helps them to get some food and find them a new family so their life can improve. It helps their family babies, kids, teenagers even pregnant women survive in the world. So this is why we need to help Fair Trade and donate money to them and they can save our lives! Our world would be nothing and terrible without it and out lives would be in despair and we would all be dying.
well done great work from fartun.
1. I like your writing because of the descriptive and persuasive language you used and the picture of Fairtrade.
2. Can you include an extra picture?
3. Can you change your handwriting because it is a bit hard to read.
1. I like you made it really on the point
2. Some people think that Fair Trade is too expensive but I disagree with them, it’s good
3.I like your handwriting
Thank you >^<
you did a great piece of writing keep it up
2.I liked the whole thing.Some people think that Fair Trade is too expensive but I disagree with them, it’s good
Fair Trade
to pay just a little bit of money to help support the Fair Trade community. Fair Trade helps poor people get some money so they can afford food, even a house to live and buy furniture. Fair Trade helps our environment get rid of the pollution that have given to our land. Fair Trade helps Farmers, community’s also school’s improve we all need to support Fair Trade as much as we can because Fair Trade helps this world. Even though you have to play to help Fair Trade you have to do it! Without Fair Trade poor people could die without any money no homes no food to survive outside they may even freeze to death! So this is why we need to help Fair Trade as much as we can to save all those poor people out there so they can have a better life! Fair Trade is what we need in this world and some countries don’t even have Fair Trade so we need to donate as much money as we can to help Fair Trade get over to other countries who don’t have it yet so they can start getting a better life and help their own family survive, there a millions of poor kids out there with no family Fair Trade helps them to get some food and find them a new family so their life can improve. It helps their family babies, kids, teenagers even pregnant women survive in the world. So this is why we need to help Fair Trade and donate money to them and they can save our lives! Our world would be nothing and terrible without it and out lives would be in despair and we would all be dying.
well done great work from fartun.
Thank you so much <3
you should use high level word from fartun
well done shannon it was amazing
1.I realy liked your paraghraph because you gave very good reasons.
2.what did they eat?
3.I suggest next time try to start with different openers
1. I like your writing because of the descriptive and persuasive language you used and the picture of Fairtrade.
2. Can you include an extra picture?
3. Can you change your handwriting because it is a bit hard to read.
Wow Shannon that is amazing