1.I think your work was nice because you wrote key information in it.
2.How do you think you can improve your work?
3.You can improve your work by writing a counter argument.
Zeynep, I really liked your blog because it is really detailed and it has a lot of information.
Can you make it a bit less shorter next time?
The next time you make a blog, you can make it less complicated.
1.Your sentence makes sense.
2.Why did you write social instead of another word.
3.You can improve your work by writing a counter-argument by huseyint.
1. Zeynep your work is fantastic! you include very specific facts about Fair trade
2.what is going to happen to the pupils ?
3.next time you need to write more about the pupils : what they receive to display in the school, what they can do to help the farmers and more……..
1. I like your work because it is very detailed.
2. Next time write a shorter paragraph.
3. the next time you write a blog you could add more punctuation.
Hi Zeynep, your work looks really nice and has lots of technical words related to fair trade. I think that next time you should try to add some pictures to make it eye-catching.
1.I think your work was nice because you wrote key information in it.
2.How do you think you can improve your work?
3.You can improve your work by writing a counter argument.
thank you for your lovely comment and next time I will add a counter argument
Zeynep, I really liked your blog because it is really detailed and it has a lot of information.
Can you make it a bit less shorter next time?
The next time you make a blog, you can make it less complicated.
thank you for your lovely comment and I did not make it long I made it bigger
1.Your sentence makes sense.
2.Why did you write social instead of another word.
3.You can improve your work by writing a counter-argument by huseyint.
I will put a counter argument next time and I wanted to use social
1. Zeynep your work is fantastic! you include very specific facts about Fair trade
2.what is going to happen to the pupils ?
3.next time you need to write more about the pupils : what they receive to display in the school, what they can do to help the farmers and more……..
thank you for your lovely comment and I will write what will happen to the pupils
1.zeynep lke your paragraph
2.next time write shorter
3.The next time use adverbs and verbs .
thank you and I will use more adverbs and verbs
1. I like your work because it is very detailed.
2. Next time write a shorter paragraph.
3. the next time you write a blog you could add more punctuation.
thank you and I will add more punctuation and I made the words better
1. I like your sentences
2.make it shorter?
3.use CAPITAL LETTER.
I have used capital letters and I will make it shorter
I like your because it nice
thank you andfor your sentence
thanks for your reply zeynep!:)
GREAT WORK ZEYZEY
Hi Zeynep, your work looks really nice and has lots of technical words related to fair trade. I think that next time you should try to add some pictures to make it eye-catching.
Great work!