1. I really like how you’ve explained what Fair trade is, the only thing you need to improve is your spellings, for example ;favour, and you need to improve your sentence; if you wanted to get a sweet from a shop and the sweet was p0 p and you had 1 pound you will expect 9,but you would need 10 p, more p for, which should be from, the till man that wont, what do you mean the till man wont you?
2.Why do you think that Fair trade is great?
3.I suggest that you should improve your work add higher level punctuation to improve your work.
1.i like how you linked Fair trade with something you will do in real life such as the sentence you wrote about the shop.
2.Why did you write that you will need 9p change from 1pound when the sweet was 90p?
3.To improve your work you could write more!
1.Fartun I like how you made the point
2.How would you stop this
3. You could work on your spelling
thank you for your wise replys 😀
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1. I really like how you’ve explained what Fair trade is, the only thing you need to improve is your spellings, for example ;favour, and you need to improve your sentence; if you wanted to get a sweet from a shop and the sweet was p0 p and you had 1 pound you will expect 9,but you would need 10 p, more p for, which should be from, the till man that wont, what do you mean the till man wont you?
2.Why do you think that Fair trade is great?
3.I suggest that you should improve your work add higher level punctuation to improve your work.
thank you Shannon
Your welcome ^_^
Forgot to wrote from Shannon
1.Hy fartun I really liked what you wrote
By the way your blog is AWSOME!!! >.<
1.i like how you linked Fair trade with something you will do in real life such as the sentence you wrote about the shop.
2.Why did you write that you will need 9p change from 1pound when the sweet was 90p?
3.To improve your work you could write more!
THANK YOU YUSUF GOOD TIPS
your blog is very good! But I know you can write more
thank you yusuf
😀
well done!
THANKES
1.You wrote a great Fairtrade paragraph.
2.What sentences do you like huh.
3.I wish my irish wish wash I ment I love your work a tiny little bit.:D
😀 THANKES
1.You wrote a great Fairtrade paragraph.
2.What sentences do you like huh.
3. I love your work a tiny little bit.:D
1.You wrote a great Fairtrade paragraph.
2.What sentences do you like huh?
3. I love your work a tiny little bit:D