1.I liked your work because it has good details
well done faith I loved your work
Why do farmers have to work day and night? I like how you’ve added the word land lords to describe who farmers have sold it to.
thank you shannon
1. I liked your work because you said that they worked all night. 2. how did they work all night? 3.To improve you could add more information.
1.well done Fatih I really like you fact about Fairtrade. 2.can you add more fact about the farmers? 3.next time write more fact about the farmers.
1. WOW!!!!!!!!!!! your work it’s really good. I LIKE THAT YOU WRITE ABOUT HOW MANY DAYS THE FARMERS WORK. 2. what is going to happen to the pupils ? 3. next time write more about the pupils and the schools
thanks i will improve
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1.I liked your work because it has good details
well done faith I loved your work
Why do farmers have to work day and night? I like how you’ve added the word land lords to describe who farmers have sold it to.
thank you shannon
1. I liked your work because you said that they worked all night.
2. how did they work all night?
3.To improve you could add more information.
1.well done Fatih I really like you fact about Fairtrade.
2.can you add more fact about the farmers?
3.next time write more fact about the farmers.
1. WOW!!!!!!!!!!! your work it’s really good. I LIKE THAT YOU WRITE ABOUT HOW MANY DAYS THE FARMERS WORK.
2. what is going to happen to the pupils ?
3. next time write more about the pupils and the schools
thanks i will improve